It didn’t felt like a 3 day gamejam game, it could have been the beginning of any bought game imo.
The art is top notch, there are several characters with a story, a personality, lines of dialogs, the gameplay is nice, a bit hard but since you made a guide I wasn’t stuck. Really this didn’t seemed rushed at all and I would love to play a longer version of this game so tell me if you ever make one <3
I played it... and wanted it to be more. No no no wait, not in a bad way - I liked it so much that I started imagin how you could expand on this game.
Some Ideas:
Make the beads roll down the chain and clicker with sfx into place.
Let the Background behind the Customers be alittle alive with a swaying tree, maybe you switch position, and then a market is in the background etc.
Let the Customers wobble a little like breathing, and some Expressions like "thinking, Shamed, scary, Wispering, Happy"
Let the Books pop out and Open infront so the UI expands like a Book opening.
The Music is perfekt and amazing! I like the cozyness of the game and the Art is wonderfull! YOU 3 made a wonderfull game! I highly appriciate the time spend with it!
ty for the critique! That was the very next thing on our list to implement but didn't make it within the time limit, maybe in a patch after the jam's judging period! ;)
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"i will cry" i might be an eldritch horror
It didn’t felt like a 3 day gamejam game, it could have been the beginning of any bought game imo. The art is top notch, there are several characters with a story, a personality, lines of dialogs, the gameplay is nice, a bit hard but since you made a guide I wasn’t stuck. Really this didn’t seemed rushed at all and I would love to play a longer version of this game so tell me if you ever make one <3
I played it... and wanted it to be more. No no no wait, not in a bad way - I liked it so much that I started imagin how you could expand on this game.
Some Ideas:
Make the beads roll down the chain and clicker with sfx into place.
Let the Background behind the Customers be alittle alive with a swaying tree, maybe you switch position, and then a market is in the background etc.
Let the Customers wobble a little like breathing, and some Expressions like "thinking, Shamed, scary, Wispering, Happy"
Let the Books pop out and Open infront so the UI expands like a Book opening.
The Music is perfekt and amazing! I like the cozyness of the game and the Art is wonderfull! YOU 3 made a wonderfull game! I highly appriciate the time spend with it!
i wish there was a log of interactions so i can see what was said in case i forget.
ty for the critique! That was the very next thing on our list to implement but didn't make it within the time limit, maybe in a patch after the jam's judging period! ;)